Falling Apart

...love can't you see my world is falling apart.

I dance in the midst of rain
while crying because of pain
never know how it ended like this
hope gone and tired of making a wish

world was ruined apart
on the floor shattered pieces of heart
one way or two
i sucked at love

suck cause i believe you do love me
but the truth it's not me
it him my friend
the one i called my best friend

you two betrayed me
stab a knife in my back
holding each others hand while i can't see
and that terribly sucks

it hurt to know that you used me
used me to be my best friend lover
what happened to you my love
can't you see now,
my world is falling apart..

Author's Note

..this is a request from one of my friend in face book..thanks to him I've got some idea.. =D hope you like it.. =D

Reviews

[D S Rollins]

Really nice! I enjoyed it.

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my goodness-this is just a luxurious piece of poetry!!!

:)

[Paul Okeke]

i love this