Make a Wish!!!

..make a wish, it's not yet too late.. =D

You have ten seconds
make a wish out of falling star
before it disappear in the night sky
and before battling in a war

wish for your family
wish for the one you love
wish for your friends
that they won't be sad

it's not yet too late
wish for another five seconds
wish to reach your goals
wish to reach your dreams

wish to have your own house
wish to have you own car
wish to have peace
wish to stop this war..

there's nothing wrong when you wished
nothing will be loose
not sure it that will come true
but at least you try..

Author's Note

..i wanted to make a wish..make a wish..out of falling star XD

Reviews

[YouoweYoupay]

Innocent wishes smoking into the night sky. Nice poem :). You need t check for grammar errors though. Keep writing.

-Wella.

[nono]

I love it! xD Awesome job! I really was hoping that people would do this prompt! I love it keep up the great work!

[Jonathan]

Haha this poem reminds of my childhood
Days. the funny thing about wishing is while
you stand their and wish there are others
Working to make things come true

[Ruth]

And inbetween the material, comes the peace, lovely love!
I wish that could be the case, beautifully voiced!
xx

[Wondering Mind]

one can wish, but be careful what you wish for... :)