Heartbreaks

its my experience about last Thursday if I'm right...please don't miss reading this mess...stupid girl like me don't have any place in your heart

I saw him hour ago at the mall holding somebody's hand- I'm so broken, knowing that girl is his new girlfriend. My heart was scattered on the floor leaving it broken into pieces. I can't see the colorful world anymore- talking and buzzing gone even the beautiful bags I wanted to buy now, vanish in the thin air. I was alone in the dark room with nothing- even my best friend's gone and so people . Time for crying but I'm in the middle of the crowd I felt their presence even I can't see them. Chin up I started walking again out of that place, we met each others eyes but, it wasn't that feeling anymore- no happiness can be found, only sorrow and anguish left inside my personality. I found the way back to the real dimension of happiness, sorrow, freedom, sadness and joy. It seem so unfamiliar to me, everything change for just a second turning to the darkness. But I still hold on hoping that someday this place gonna be the witness of my happiness, this place will be the place for joy not for another miserable events.

Author's Note

i really hate the word love...so complex...more complex than a web made by a spider...heck!!!

Reviews

[goodbye noooooo]

touching... but it seems you have a hard life. U-U

[Aline S. Iniestra]

So touching! Sometimes we need to be face to face with reality and accept it. Sorrow cannot be avoided, but must be used to understand, grow and learn. It's part of it all. It hurts at first, but in the end it will be one of the most important experinces. Well written, you poured your heart out! =)

[Sarah>_>]

At first, I couldn't picture myself the way you were talking about in your poem, but then I imagined my friend if she saw her boyfriend got a new girlfriend, and NOW I understand.

[Cynthia]

It's really sad, but it is good that the girl still hopes. If she hopes, she stil have a chance to live on. That's a good story.

[Ruth]

You know hon, life has a knack of slapping us at times!
Always heartbreaking these situations, it is unfortunately part of the learning process, hugs to you
xx