Dreaming

Dreaming

A Poem by ForTheWorld
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its my dream...and i wish it could really happen someday..

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I love dreaming
I love thinking
Thinking that someday I would fly
Higher than the highest cloud in the sky

Someday I will turn into a mermaid
My fear in the water will slowly fade
I will explore the deepest sea
Then speak with the all fishes I will see.

I will run as fast as I can
Faster that any human would
Faster than any cheetah in the land
Then there goes me as the actress

I play the role of a girl
who loves not only adventure but also a thrill
A thrill of being popular
A thrill of being so powerful

I would stand any problem with just a snap
Magic will help me make a trap
Trap for the obstacles in my life
then i will torn it into pieces with the help of a magic knife

Sometimes daydreaming is the best way to escape problems
In life full of trials and obstacles
Definitely there's sorrow and betrayal
But in the end there goes the simple things you wanted to simply live for.

© 2010 ForTheWorld


Author's Note

ForTheWorld
wanna have a daydream today that we don't have any classes anymore....stressed

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Dream on, my friend... I only hope that one day I can be invited to see you wonderland as well.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Loved it all, except for one line,
"I will run the fastest as I could", the syntax doesn't feel right here. Maybe change it to "I will run as fast as I can" or something like that.


Posted 14 Years Ago


very nice... ^_^

Posted 14 Years Ago


Dreams are so wonderful! lol We can be anyone, anywhere ey?
You have captured this really well in this poem love, awesome work!
xx

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on August 5, 2010
Last Updated on August 7, 2010
Tags: Life

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ForTheWorld
ForTheWorld

pangasinan, 1, Philippines



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write, yeah, it is not the only thing my life is composed of, but when reality stroke really bad, it is the last I want to live without, well of course, families and air plus food and water are great .. more..

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