In Opposite

In Opposite

A Poem by ForTheWorld
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A poem (much likely a story) about a boy named Sean and the trends...

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In a small city of Pangasinan
There live a boy named Sean
He was a son of a wealthy congressman
And he has his "true friends"

He treats them everyday
Gave them money when they say
Spoiled them like his own son
Never care 'bout his money as long as he have fun

One day, his papa died
Left them with nothing
There is no suspect for the crime
Nor any money that weigh a dime.

He didn't see any of his true friends
Except for a girl who comfort him
She gave a paper with trend
Pull it so strong that it fell

See the foundation?
She said looking at him
It was not tough enough to hold the trends
But, it was tough enough to be not ruined a lot.

Yeah she's right
The trends are my friends who love not me
But my money
While I am the paper holding them

Now he learned a lesson
That true friend is the one who will comfort him
Not the one who will leave him
In times of sorrow....

© 2010 ForTheWorld


Author's Note

ForTheWorld
Why I entitled it "In Opposite"? Because the main character here is my mortal enemy, much likely that. He was my "true friend"......not for the same meaning but for the opposite...

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A very touching story, I felt the emotions through every stanza. Great piece

Posted 14 Years Ago


so the girl was his true friend? ^^

Posted 14 Years Ago


that's nice that you would do that for someone you don't necessarily like :) nice work!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I liked the poem (story as you say). Very well written with a strong feeling at the end! An honest truth =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


An interesting spin love!
Great poem, offers an insight to how exactly people can be, awesome piece
xx

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 25, 2010
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ForTheWorld
ForTheWorld

pangasinan, 1, Philippines



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