I want to be like air

It was just based from my imagination..but still hope you like it

     Everybody hates me; they do not even care if I'm still alive; do not even care if I'm breathing. They only love me if they need something- something that only me can provide. I hate their attitudes but I can do nothing- just sit in the corner, listening to the music even it kills me. Everybody in the room doesn't sees me- like an air, it surrounds the whole world but no one sees it despite everybody needs it.
     How I wish that I'm really like an air. I don't need every but everybody needs me. I'm their life but for me- I can live without them. That's the best reason I can give to myself that I have a purpose on this Earth- a very important purpose- a purpose that only me can do. I want to be a part of this world- to have purpose- to tell myself that I'm not useless despite I'm just a little girl who knows nothing but loves everything.

Author's Note

Its only my imagination that works but hope you like like it...

Reviews

[Mr. Darkblood]

hmmm, seems kind of suicidal and depressing at first, but it's actually very relateable (did I spell that right?) and we all feel that way at some point in our lives. To be honest, it wasn't that "imaginative", but whatever, it was a good (very) short story and I enjoyed reading it :)

[Andrew Wright]

Beautiful. Your imagination definitely works! I'm looking forward to reading more from you :)

[Sam Severn]

This poem ripped my heart out!!! I love the idea of wanting to be like air. N' I love your ending line, "I'm just a little girl who knows nothing but loves everything..." What a fantastic statement! GREAT, GREAT WORK! ㋡

[Ruth]

An admiral way to be too love! Sometimes it seems as though we are here only for others, its a tender balance!
Awesome thoughts sweety
xx

[NoAirToBreatheXSuffocat..]

when i first saw this poem, i thought the title was, "i want to be a killer" I was like WHOAAAAAA but now that read it, i love it.