One Final Goodbye

One Final Goodbye

A Poem by H4zem
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A poem about friendship. The second poem I have written. I put all my feelings into this poem and tried my best to make it special, I hope you like it.

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One Final Goodbye


Every ending is the start of a new beginning 

Making memories leaves me grinning 


Strangers meet and become friends wishing for their friendship to never end

Little did they know that all friendships always tend to descend 


My brain can't comprehend how these memories we had shared are coming to an end


One day these memories will be forgotten 

But the impact they made will leave my heart soft like cotton 


A friend is a type of person who welcomes you with a warm heart 

True friendship will never fall apart 


- H4zem


© 2022 H4zem


Author's Note

H4zem
Friends. Friends are there for you, you grow up together, you care for each-other, and you want what's best for the other. Many of us don't realize how important friends are. You really start to appreciate your friend more and realize how important they were to you once you loose them. So don't take your friends for granted and cherish every moment you spend with them. - H4zem

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A very apt tribute to friendship and so well written. Friendships do have a life cycle as you have stated here, with the initial thrill and later the diminishing and moving away. Yet, the memories last for all time and true friends never part. Appreciate your author's note on the subject. Nicely written H4zem. 🙋‍♀️

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

H4zem

2 Years Ago

Thank you for commenting I appreciate it, this poem is pretty meaningful to me, and I’m glad that .. read more



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Not bad at all for just #2. All things do pass, sooner or later, but good friendship, even when long in the past, can leave us with strengths, whether we are aware of them or not.

Posted 2 Years Ago


This is a very nice and nicely written poem about friendships. Your note spoke volumes too. True friends are hard to find. But people who are friendly are golden too. Tyfs

Posted 2 Years Ago


Congratulations on your start into poetry. Keep in mind, though, poems do not have to rhyme. Poems have rhythm but don't always rhyme.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Goodbyes are usually the hardest. But sometimes are for the best. Beautiful piece

Posted 2 Years Ago


True friendships can last a life time. I still have friends from school years and my early twenties. Others have come and gone. All of them have left me with memories. Your poem is a nice tribute to friendship and many of your readers will relate. Yes, friendships can be like soft cotton round the heart. Warming, I like that. Thank you for posting, both the poem and your author notes.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


and true friendship is being there for each other through the best of times and the worst of times.

not just the smiles but the frowns too....I have been lucky enough to have some friendships that have lasted

60 some years.

so lucky.
I really like the upbeat content and likable arrangement of words in this.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was beautifully written and clearly filled with much love. This was a wonderful tribute to friends and friendship in general and reminder of what friends can really be, a silver lining. Your choice of words here fit perfectly, making the poem even sweeter and softer than it already started out. I love the way you write! Thank you for sharing (:

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem kiddo!... This is well written and I can see the progress you've made so far. Friends do come and go eventually :( I lost my fiance 2 years ago and he was my best friend so this poem really felt like home. The last line really emphasized and was a great end to the poem. The author's note is also very well written. I would love to know what inspired you to make this 😢 Keep up the good work buddy!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very apt tribute to friendship and so well written. Friendships do have a life cycle as you have stated here, with the initial thrill and later the diminishing and moving away. Yet, the memories last for all time and true friends never part. Appreciate your author's note on the subject. Nicely written H4zem. 🙋‍♀️

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

H4zem

2 Years Ago

Thank you for commenting I appreciate it, this poem is pretty meaningful to me, and I’m glad that .. read more

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Added on January 12, 2022
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H4zem
H4zem

Toronto, Canada



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Hi my name is Hazem, I'm 14 years old I recently got into writing. I always write my thoughts down and I enjoy writing poems. I've been looking for a new hobby for a while and I found out that I reall.. more..

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