Tragedy

But I can't give it back.

I gave

my love

a golden ring

but lost

a finger

in its forging.

Reviews

[D]

Mm, what is this? This is a form that swells to accomodate fewer words, and I could feel the history behind this ring grow until the piece just... well, felt bigger. I love it. I'm going to look up the form so I can get back to you. I'm curious to see what else you can work into this type of piece.

[Poeticpiers]

brief to the point of curtness but it speaks volumes