Scale of Seven

Scale of Seven

A Poem by H.
"

Eventually this will never end.

"

Vibratory vessels
in my veins,
a vindication.

A lie I taught,
a lie I told,
a fabled fabrication

has fallen to
the firestorm of
my imagination.

That sheet before
the seven more
that sing of the salvation

fell in three,
and now I must
ascend this scale of seven

between this mortal
neverending
thirst for my addiction

and forever finding
fact from fiction;
truth in utter contradiction.

© 2008 H.


Author's Note

H.
Do you get a funny feeling when you try to make yourself believe two contradictory statements are simultaneously true?

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Again, I liked this writing - writing as thesis. I think you are a good writer and a good thinker. the words are so brief and brave.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like how you set this one up. The alliteration, and structured off-rhymes (complete with excellent and pronounced punctuation) helped to create a very steady flow. I love any theme that explores contrasting, dualistic ideas. "Truth in utter contradiction." Beautiful.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it, a tid bit choppy buy very well written. and I used to, but I believe in a lot of contradictory statements nowadays. excellent write, I really enjoyed it. welcome to the cafe.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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H.
H.

Panama City, FL



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I've thrown away the map, but can't let go of the wheel. I'm a musician. I've been writing poetry for much longer than I've been playing, so it's odd I consider myself as such first and foremost. .. more..

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