To Sadness,

To Sadness,

A Story by gypsy scribbler

Dear Sadness,


Sorry, I suppose I am being ungrateful. I am all upset and whiny and craving attention, and here you are - practically chasing me. And what am I doing? Ignoring and avoiding you. Instead of appreciating your company and just being with you for a while. Do you have something to tell me? Something that would change my life? Or something funny? Or more likely sad? 


Hey, why does it have to be about me? Do you simply want to be acknowledged and loved? I guess we all do.

© 2017 gypsy scribbler


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'Do you simply want to be acknowledged and loved? I guess we all do.'

This seems to be someone looking into space, staring into a shadow, wishing it was who it should be.. then, needing to make contact. Your words are placed very naturally, honestly. Rather a conversation between reality and imponderability.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Aloha gypsy, a very emotional piece. Sad and knowing. Your final lines are very good. Izzy

Posted 7 Years Ago


gypsy scribbler

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
Island Hippy

7 Years Ago

You're welcom
This is interesting, I don't entirely understand the first half but the last half is beautiful

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on March 23, 2017
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Tags: short, poem, story, philosphy, free verse

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