The Notebook

Her ring shimmers in

The slivered light as she strokes

Another man’s hair.

 

Reviews

[Crazy Cat Man]

Oh I love this movie "The Notebook"......the lead guy is my hero....becuz he got the girl back.....He was not rich or more handsome as the other guy but...he kept it real and showed her love......she realises that she has more fun with the original guy than with the Pretty Boy Soldier...great tribute to the movie..

[DarkAngelWriter]

I really liked this one. So much said in so few words. I've never seen the Notebook so I can't compare, but I still say great write.

[Clarisse Nanoit]

Great moment from the movie, and you wrote just so that even people who hadn't seen the movie would know what was going on in this moment. This poem exudes talent! Good luck again!
KH