Her

Her

A Poem by Mia

Be scared

 

She’s coming for you

 

She’ll tear at your bones

 

And scratch your eyeballs until they bleed like hell

 

She’ll rip your flesh until you soul comes out

 

Then she’ll take that with her

 

And nothing of you will be left

 

It will all be gone

 

All of you.

 

You will be an empty shell

 

Standing on the brink of dawn

 

You will collapse

 

And your life will fail

 

You will see no point in living

 

So you will leave the world

 

And then you will be gone

 

And be living in a new place

 

I will never see you again

 

That makes me happy

 

You are gone forever

 

And it’s all thanks to her

© 2010 Mia


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Mia
Thanks Robyn!

Posted 14 Years Ago


woah this poem is so raw and filled with emotions
i really like your choice of words throughout the poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


There is that sense of fear and tension that builds as your words flow down. Vivid and gripping, making a powerful read!

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