5 Haiku

The blue mountain rising

out of the mists:

A jagged hard stone.

Red feathered bird

floating on the wind-

down the mountain.

Green-emerald sea

sparkling at midday:

the gulls have caught a crab.

Flashing neon lights

bouncing about the dance floor-

someone has lost a heel.

Bed of flowers sways

pollinating the warm breeze-

the honey bee returns.

Reviews

[Gandré]

I love HAIKU in series, this is not easy to do. You did it well, these attractive colors, imagination, in which the writer would see his world, elegantly painted.

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

This is a piece that surpasses me. I am assumed by images. I truly apppreciate these pices....for to me they reflect that true, honest and simple techninique of the Art..thanks

[JENY]

you are lucky.....
really a garden is there ....in your imagination....
from which you pick up images and drape
them in words....
only to charm...us....
and keep wondering....