Night out

The Taxi pulled up:

a night 

of booze and laughter,

of slow sipping

whiskey and tunes, dancing

caught glancing at the smooth-skinned

girl in the red dress and heels, flowing

through the mass of body's 

a frictionless slithering dance

sultry and practiced

masterfully, mysteriously prepared

with every flick of the iris,

a maneuver of manneristic

precision.

Reviews

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

This piece seems to be in a hustle to glide through to find its rest in "precision" I would love to see this piece Samuel perfomed on stage to music.....African Drums....It would be interesting also to perform this piece in one long breath. Great write.

[JENY]

Seems like a commentary....
No juice in description.....
I expect more from you.....
Please convey.....some beautiful , pithy thoughts...
that lurk behind the neurons of your brain
It is good....
But I dont know...I expect more