why?

why?

A Poem by alex

why do u say this to me? 
why do u have to hurt me?
why do u think that i dont love you?
why dont u tell the truth?
why do u cuss at me?
why do you hit me?

   why?

© 2012 alex


Author's Note

alex
my first one. i did bad but i hope to inprove!!

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This is not bad at all, I like the questions. Keep up the good work. I'd love to read more.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good....:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is good...keep writing and u'll get better....the more u speak from the heart the better it is to the secret ingredient is your heart not your mind

Posted 12 Years Ago


It's always good to ask questions or to ask why something is the way it is. It's okay to be curious and ask if you're unsure of something or in need of an explanation. It's always good to get the reasons for certain things, just don't be afraid to be curious and ask questions anytime in your life. It's good for you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice job. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can really relate to that.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm glad you decided to give it try! You see how many people liked this? Its hard sometimes to convey what you want to say but you did a good job with that...nice work :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very relatable.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice

Posted 12 Years Ago



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