Dark layers !

Dark layers are the negative auro around us and the negativity we are bounded to.

The matter of Me,
Is continued to be,

It doesn't has it's end,
Let the destiny pretend,

It's a story untold,
& a mystery to hold,

It's the darkness in the noon,
May die very soon,

It's nothing but a shell of negativity on me,
I hope I succeed to break it
Coz it has to be,
It really has to be.......

Author's Note

Hello everyone!!!
Am back after a long period so this is my comeback poem
Please review it as I wanna know more about my thoughts in this write up.
Thank you!

Reviews

[mou]

yes sure we must remove all those hazy dark layer around us and feel the world as it is in real..you have thrown a positive note and it can be matched with different aspect of each of us..lovely write

[gunjan]

Thank you so much for appreciating my work n I really hope that we all make our life better being away from dark layers..