Keep It Equal !

Keep It Equal !

A Poem by gunjan

No need to LOVE me,

If you don’t TRUST me.

No need to CARE for me,

If you choose your WORK first.

No need to HUG me,

When you’re LOOKING at something else.

No need to TALK to me,

If you just wanna be SILENT.

No need to RESTRICT me,

When you’re ROAMING out.

No need to SHOUT at me,

When you’re proved WRONG.

No need to show me

That you are the MAN,

Because my HEART has chosen you

To be with ME…..

So keep it EQUAL Mr. MAN……

© 2016 gunjan


Author's Note

gunjan
this is something what i feel like,
at present the girls can do anything but still somewhere they are not considered to be equal.

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Perfectly said. Neat delivery. I like the no clutter way of your writing style.

Posted 8 Years Ago


gunjan

8 Years Ago

thank you so much for your kind words.....
Your form and flow are so distinct, so vivid and powerful. Your message melts so perfectly into the heart and soul of your words.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Interesting but good flow and timing , kind of hard subject but everyone has their own reality, well expressed

Posted 8 Years Ago


gunjan

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your time and valuable words....
Thank you
I feel like your poem had pierced my heart, especially with the line:

No need to CARE for me,
If you choose your WORK first.

It's been a while since I've read your poem and you still hold that magic. All I can say is, keep up the good work. This poem can penetrate deep into man's heart, especially when Life demands so much from you that you neglected the most essential people and things around you. Great job! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


gunjan

8 Years Ago

thanks TheMalady....this is real because a man just completes his responsibility and nothing else.read more

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Added on February 29, 2016
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Tags: love, trust, hug, restrict, care, work, roaming, shout, silent, equal, man.

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gunjan
gunjan

mumbai, maharashtra, India



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