Love not again

This is about a dream I had a while back. It's kinda weird but if it wasn't... It wouldn't be my writing haha.

Mushroom cloud illuminates the skies

I don't know how long I cried

One brief moment or a thousand years

That mushroom cloud brought in my worst fears

A world without your perfect smile

I'm darkening with every mile

Gravity the new enemy

I'm pinned, fallen on my knees

Hands held up for you to pull me on

I'll stay there kneeling my whole life long

Love not again

Can't love again

Breathe not again

Can't breathe again

'Til death do us part

Now we must part 

Love not again

Can't love again

Reviews

[marisa starkilicious]

Okay, really like this one. Like, seriously. And when I use teenage speak, you know I love it. XD Just...every line is impressive. The repitition of "mushroom cloud" in the beginning (it actually reminded me of a dream I had about an atomic bomb, which actually frightened me on my part), and

"I'm darknening with every mile/gravity the new enemy/I'm pinned, fallen to my knees/Hands held up for you to pull me on/I'll stay there kneeling my whole life long."

And the repitions in the end. Wait, why am I writing this? I like every single line, so I'm not going to write the entire piece over. :D