Stay With Me

My first love poem to be submitted here... Here's to you Mr. Bacon:)

Your eyes they tell me,

They tell me you love me

And I could stay in your gaze all night.

Your hands they touch me,

Ever so gently

And I could hold your hand all night.

Heart beating,

Beating faster,

Emotions pulsing,

Pulsing so quickly,

Please don’t leave tonight.

 

Stay with me I’m dreaming of love,

Love me forever, I can’t get enough

Of the air that you breathe,

The songs that we sing,

The melodies we make together.

Just one hand is lonely,

One heart’s not enough.

So love me tonight.

Stay here, tonight.

 

Our lips are craving

For that special touch,

We’re going to have to break down.

Our bodies swaying

Oh so gracefully,

Around we spin again.

Love getting stronger,

Always stronger,

Arms pull tight,

Always tighter,

Please don’t leave tonight.

 

Stay with me I’m dreaming of love,

Love me forever, I can’t get enough

Of the air that you breathe,

The songs that we sing,

The melodies we make together.

Just one hand is lonely,

One heart’s not enough.

So love me tonight.

Stay here, tonight.

 

Our hearts are stirring,

New feeling occurring,

Pull me into your chest.

Tears freely flowing,

Our faces glowing,

We’ll never be put to rest.

 

Stay with me I’m dreaming of love,

Love me forever, I can’t get enough

Of the air that you breathe,

The songs that we sing,

The melodies we make together.

Just one hand is lonely,

One heart’s not enough.

So love me tonight.

Stay here, tonight.

Stay here, tonight.

Author's Note

Please be harsh in your critique... This isn't my strongest area and I want to get better.

Reviews

[marisa starkilicious]

You take such trite and tired words and ideas, and breath such amazing life into them. You give them new meaning, so it's as if I have never heard these things before. The way you animate a written piece is just...undescribable. I wish I could give you a more intelligent and "harsh" review, but this is too perfect to touch.

[LilyM;)]

this is really awesome girly and beautiful....i miss you!

[LilyM;)]

I thought u said you were gonna give me hints:P

[Red Rose]

i love you so dearly, my friend.
and you are so talented.