A Year in a Day

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The spring morning

The rising sun

Gnaws at the snow

Which seeps away

The summer noon

Crickets chorus

In clashing chords

that somehow match

The autumn eve

I stop to crunch

A crispy leaf

Another falls

The winter night

Cold in the dark

A land of white

Shadowy shapes

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the Jorio Contest!

[Helen Crutchett]

Beautifully done! Lovely images throughout. Keep up the good work and thank you for joining the jorio contest!

[Frances O'Neill]

Chirpy, terse, and cute!

[angelina neves]

lovely!

[Haifa]

It is nice, it can be short because a year in a day can be much things happen. Good one, keep writing.

[Wicahpi]

Each season has it's own natural gift to bestow upon us.
You've given an example of each in this sweet poem.
"Crickets chorus" being one of my favorites.
Well done.