Contemplation

Contemplation

A Poem by the_stoic










care not for what they say
for their thoughts are narrow


care not for how they act
for their receptors are askew

care for what you feel within
for inner satiation is the elixir

care for what you dream of
for it holds the key to all...

© 2011 the_stoic


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this leads us to ponder in detail...well the first line is obvious...but the second stanza I pictured and yes,actions do depend on reception...and pursuing our dreams we attain the elixir of euphoria/life as rightly referred in harry potter...wonderful lines indeed!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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there is great depth to this piece. we should hold our dreams and keep trying to reach them. Dont let other say that it is impossible. A great many things have been accomplished that people thought would never happen.

Posted 12 Years Ago


namaste~

Posted 12 Years Ago


this leads us to ponder in detail...well the first line is obvious...but the second stanza I pictured and yes,actions do depend on reception...and pursuing our dreams we attain the elixir of euphoria/life as rightly referred in harry potter...wonderful lines indeed!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the wisdom to the poem. Last two statements are fact.
"care for what you feel within
for inner satiation is the elixir

care for what you dream of
for it holds the key to all..."
Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Unusual, I do care for this sort of contemplation.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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