Fickleness

Fickleness

A Poem by the_stoic
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the two faces of life and the way we react to both ..

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sweet pleasure or bitter pain
both leave behind an indelible stain
for the first we vehemently praise His name
whilst the other initiates the blame game ..

© 2011 the_stoic


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either extreme sets us out of balance...the righteous become condeming judges or blissfully ignoring the pain of this world while the angry are acting out in violence and adding to the pain....so true....we can't keep our fingers pointed or our arms folded...or reaching up praising and believing if we pray hard enough something will fall from the sky - no one is looking each other in the eye...


Posted 13 Years Ago


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man alwayzz digs for reasons behind evythn...wen happy d Almighty is indeed d mightiest of all n its by His grace dat thngs are great..n once faced wid sorrow...He is 2 be blamed fr every tear dat flows...evn God is praised n disgraced at will.. nicely summed up in dese lines..

Posted 13 Years Ago


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true balance is the face of relative..what would one be without the other..?

Posted 13 Years Ago


Easy to blame someone else. Hard to accept blame. The poem was short. But you made your point. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This should be a famous quote... it is SO true and yet such a shame that it is. I love the pic of the 2 office workers. That is just like it is at my job.
This was clever, concise and creative. Well done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I love your short and simple pieces. I love this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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beautiful you captured how all the faithful feel when their wishes are not granted by God. They blame him for his lack of action calling him an absentee land lord or the like yet when their wishes are granted they joyously praise him and thank him with bended knees and tearful eyes. :D nice work

Posted 13 Years Ago


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the blame game you nailed it

Posted 13 Years Ago


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another great short piece you have presented for us Stoic! you need to have your own calendar with each of these for a different month! very nice work, very original rhyme scheme, and incredible vocabulary all in only twenty six words!!! bravo!!!
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Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent you have managed to intertwine ideas rhymes and conclusions it makes sense it has melody

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I this short and simple poem.

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