Reminiscence

Sunshine on my shoulders always makes me high
though her memories at times bring in a sigh
If I could choose a time apt to bid adieu
morning it would be, replete with the dazzling dew
and in the moments that would be my last
the joys of love, I'll relive from my past ..

 

Author's Note

a random write .. so don't expect it to be great on literary terms .

Reviews

[RJM]

Makes me think of romance. I don't know why maybe because Valentine's is in the air or something. Still nice poem and beautiful words

[Arabdha]

this one leaves me nostalgic..adding to my library !

[Tai Chi Italy Take Two]

There is nothing random about this beautiful write my friend! I too love the dazzling dew lines...wow to romantics

Smiling at you

Tai

[Poetic Beauty]

Reflection can be a pleasant thing. The image you paint in this poem is stunning.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice poem. I like how you wrote. The last desire to be sunshine on your shoulders. A short poem with a very good message. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

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your poems are always filled with emotion ..melancholy but so enchanting...

[Cynthia]

Beautiful work! Love the imagery and the rhyme of this poem, and I love the picture as well! It really match with the poem!

[sarah]

This picture and poem are stunning great work!

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Beautifully written, I love the imagery as well.
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[Cherrie Palmer]

..If I could choose a time apt to bid adieu morning it would be, replete with the dazzling dew... great line