Woman

a witty write by a friend of mine ..

she conquers one and all

with a smile that causes dynasties to fall.

with a face as innocent as an infant

nobody can ascertain her true intent.

she has a hypnotizing look

that disarms even the biggest crook.

eyes as mystifying as an ancient cave

that make even the wizards look naive.

poets write effusive words in her praise

she wins admirers with just a gaze.

her mind is unreadable

she features in every famous fable.

where god is as helpless as a human

believe me.it's the mystery called WOMAN

Author's Note

this write is just a guy's take .. kindly do not take offenses

Reviews

[poetic soul]

wow!!!!
coming from a guy...this is awesome...a mystery yet you can write an epic on her!!!! ;)
nicely written!!!

[Ruth]

And inbetween that, there still is room for mystery lol Awesome work xx

[RJM]

i think this is your longest poem to date? =)) anyway it's beautiful and has a dose of wit that i think everyone appreciates beautiful writing :D

[Inkcognito]

The forever mystery that is woman... captivating, so lovely!

[Lydia Blackwell]

Sweet.... I love it.

[Cynthia]

Great Job! I kinda agre about the woman is unreadable iddea, who say anyone is readable? No one full 'read' someone in depth.
Great Poem!

[sarah]

wonderful job! I really love the subject and the way you wrote this! great job!

[Bethany]

Haha this is great! I suggest either using capitols or not using periods/full stops- but that's just my opinion... I think it's funny that men think women are such a mystery haha good work.

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oh..wonderful..rhyme and meter..and great subject :)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

charming and served on a sweet air of light~