Believe

something that i wrote to buckle up my fallen spirit ..

Believe in what you feel inside
as you begin to get into your stride
giving thine dreams the wings to fly
for all that thou desire, underneath the blue sky...

Author's Note

don't judge it by meters cause i am ignorant of the same .

Reviews

[dovetailer]

very nice sentiments...
the Old English pronouns are tough...
it should be..."giving THY dreams...
and "...for all that thou DOST desire...or "...all that thou DESIREST..."
I suppose if you use "THOU" in one instance, you should should be true to that and use it in place of the other "you"s in the poem...

whatever thou dost feel inside
as thou beginst to hit thy stride
endow thy dreams the wings to fly
for all thou desirest...neath clear blue sky...

all technical tricks to make your thoughts soar unfettered...
Not meaning to be critical...just wanting to help...like adjusting a crooked neck tie before your debut...

[sarah]

I love this! good work

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

purely inspirational~

[SamBug]

This was so inspirational just for four lines! :)

[ShaneBerry]

very nice, short sweet to the point, great write my friend

[Poetic Beauty]

this is a great piece saying that one should never give up on dreams for they are always attainable.

[profile deleted]

i think it is perfect.. who cares about meters or whatever that is? No explanation needed either. Write from your heart.. I do! Great Write!

[Inkcognito]

Beautiful and very empowering, my friend - you just need to take the first step to freedom.
Fly your dreams on the wings of an eagle and let your spirit soar the clear blue skies...