Suicide

Almighty does indeed give us life but what if misery becomes synonymous with life.. this is my perception and my belief .. you are welcome to stick to your beliefs . period .

my eyes swell up every night
I can no longer put on a fight

listen to these tears for they have a story to tell
as they slowly await the ringing of my death knell

'suicide' is a sin says who
what else can a tormented entity do?

the threshold limit is now crossed
my spirit is tired of being repeatedly tossed

how long am i supposed to face dejection
when every effort has been met with rejection

the relentless pain won't let go
my body has caged the soul, impending its flow

i have always been good to everyone around
even for the lowly street dog i felt empathy profound

now even my family fails to understand me
they belittle my state, right in front of me to see

false hopes have now withered away
what was my crime for which i am being made to pay?

and to those who claim that god is there
why does he put good souls in utter despair?

the devil is rising and humanity shall fall
we all shall ultimately in hell, stall...

Author's Note

i don't want a preaching or a sermon here .. if you can relate to my feelings I'll be glad .. or else sorry for spoiling your mood .

Reviews

[Ruth]

I think a lot can relate to this love!
An intensely moving poem, one that leaves the reader knowing that they are not on their own!
Wonderfully written, sometimes the thread feels as though it will snap, but in the darkness resonates freedom!
Great poem
xx

[JENY]

fantastic….
Dear stoic….
very spontaneous flow….throughout the lines…
Enjoyed it….
but hate the theme you chose...
yaaaaar...
please come out...

[Anicca]

Never apologise for writing a piece that expresses how you feel. It was sad, but a good write never the less.

[DeadToTheWorld]

I truly enjoyed this it sort of gave me a visual on something random that I do not know yes it made me sad but also with a happy tone I can somewhat relate to the form of suicide overall this is my most favorite of all your work :)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

I relate~ strongly~
no sermon from me~
humanity has failed itself atrociously by removing responsibility for self and placing it conveniently into the lap of an 'all forgiving being" I think not~

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

a very sorrowful message of the poem....anyways, this is a good poem to read:)