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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Down the aisle ..

Down the aisle ..

A Poem by the_stoic
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though only in my dreams ...

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               the eyelids flutter as they slowly give way
               to the dreams still clenched , evermore meant to stay.

              unfurling her silks she reaches out to me
               cute eyelids darkened with kohl, i can vividly see.

              holding hands, towards the aisle we promenade
               time stops, for this moment in a pearl brocade...

© 2010 the_stoic


Author's Note

the_stoic
this is something that i just felt and wrote after reading Selene's write ...

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This is beautiful. I've had the opportunity to observe how much planning, time and effort goes into weddings. Despite all that, the greatest moments are the small, quiet, loving ones. The moments that no amount of planning can supply. You captured some of these in the expression and execution of this poem. Very well done:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is beautiful. I've had the opportunity to observe how much planning, time and effort goes into weddings. Despite all that, the greatest moments are the small, quiet, loving ones. The moments that no amount of planning can supply. You captured some of these in the expression and execution of this poem. Very well done:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very cute!

Posted 14 Years Ago


smooth charm~ a pearl brocade in word streams~ =)~ delightful~

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful. Very cute. 100/100

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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