Down the aisle ..
A Poem by
the_stoic
though only in my dreams ...
the eyelids flutter as they slowly give way to the dreams still clenched , evermore meant to stay. unfurling her silks she reaches out to me cute eyelids darkened with kohl, i can vividly see. holding hands, towards the aisle we promenade time stops, for this moment in a pearl brocade...
© 2010 the_stoic
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Author's Note
this is something that i just felt and wrote after reading Selene's write ...
Featured Review
This is beautiful. I've had the opportunity to observe how much planning, time and effort goes into weddings. Despite all that, the greatest moments are the small, quiet, loving ones. The moments that no amount of planning can supply. You captured some of these in the expression and execution of this poem. Very well done:)
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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You bring back my most beautiful day still holding true 41 years later !
I echo the Featured Review by Albatross.........what more can I say ?!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
You bring back my most beautiful day still holding true 41 years later !
I echo the Featured Review by Albatross.........what more can I say ?!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
delightful
Posted 13 Years Ago
delightful
This was a cute poem. I love going to weddings. I love them so much. I know I'm going to cry when I get married. Thanks for sharing. :D
Posted 14 Years Ago
This was a cute poem. I love going to weddings. I love them so much. I know I'm going to cry when I get married. Thanks for sharing. :D
so sweet! loved it
Posted 14 Years Ago
so sweet! loved it
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Such a soft, silky poem, full of tender sweet love; and the phrase, '.. for this moment in a pearl brocade...' is lovely.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Such a soft, silky poem, full of tender sweet love; and the phrase, '.. for this moment in a pearl brocade...' is lovely.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
this is a very nice one and well written too. Nice word choices, too, although I wouldn't use the word cute. but that is all I would change. Good simple write.
Posted 14 Years Ago
this is a very nice one and well written too. Nice word choices, too, although I wouldn't use the word cute. but that is all I would change. Good simple write.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Always a beautiful sight that; Groom and bride, hand-in-hand. A small compliment for all of them here. Nicely done :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
Always a beautiful sight that; Groom and bride, hand-in-hand. A small compliment for all of them here. Nicely done :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This creates such a dreamish, tender feel. Beautiful voiced with that sense of expectation, you give us a longing look at love. Wondrous!
Posted 14 Years Ago
This creates such a dreamish, tender feel. Beautiful voiced with that sense of expectation, you give us a longing look at love. Wondrous!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This is beautiful!
Nice written!
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is beautiful!
Nice written!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Nice...I can recognize her expressions in there...
Posted 14 Years Ago
Nice...I can recognize her expressions in there...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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i won't go about describing myself cause it'll end up as a self deprecatory saga .. my poems are there to speak for me .
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