Bitter realisation

             If love within me isn't shared and doesn't grow
           If my life is an aberration that impedes the spirit's flow
              Then what good am i ,only heaven knows ...

Reviews

[YacobTihstea]

This is now one of the best things I've ever read. I just got entirely too much out of this. If I don't find someone to love, will I always be disappointed? If I'm always disappointed does that make me a bad person for never finding any joy in life? Will I be judged as so for my reluctant crime?

You just gave me a lot to think about.

Thank you =D

[Poetic Beauty]

This is simply stated but it is a great thought and very profound.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is a great piece. I really like this emotion in it. I know the feeling sometimes. I feel like I'm useless sometimes. When there isn't enough love in me...then I feel like I don't deserve to be here...thanks for sharing.

[Cherrie Palmer]

great flow and rhyme, tied up in a profound thought

[Prateeksha Khot]

loved it

[An owl on the moon]

Three lines of text.. and a world of profound thoughts flow from this. The whole of life, our meaning and purpose, questioned in relation to loving and giving. And the answer I can relate to... only heaven knows.. So powerful...

[KatiePie]

I understand what you mean, and where your coming from. I agree, it hurts like a kiss from hell to have such a strong love and to never be able to let it out, to watch and feel and experience it grow. I think that maybe that's why it's so hard to let go of someone, I mean it's not the only reason, but it plays a part. Feeling useless I mean..

[Cynthia]

I lOVE THIS REALLY MUCH!
Nice Work!

[Lydia Blackwell]

ya know, dear... i have had these same thoughts. You have organized them into a lovely little poem. nice write:)

[Adelia Alighieri]

Some brilliant use of words, great job!