just once

just once

A Poem by the_stoic
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only if i could relive those moments once more .. just once

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just once
i want to buy you a 'kolhapuri chappal'
made from the finest leather that's quite supple.

just once
i long to sleep in your cozy lap
enriching my inner being with a short nap.

just once
i yearn for you to trust me
as i whole heartedly comply with your decree.

just once
i pine to be led by you in the busy street
making our way through the fast moving fleet.

just once
i wish for you to consider me as your own
letting me enter thy pristine love zone.

just once
i bid to listen to your sweet song
taking my beats on a mystical journey, as in my heart they throng.

just once
i need an assurance that no matter what
You will always consider me as your part, even if someday I depart.

just once
i beseech thou to allow my soul to wait
cause for a moment of true love, it's never too late.

just once ..

© 2010 the_stoic


Author's Note

the_stoic
"kolhapuri chappal" is a special handcrafted sandal famous in India .

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this poem seems to tie in with you feature poem...she must be some woman...
a theme we see often...repentent man trying to win back his lady...
we take these gals for granted sometimes...make some bonehead plays and then realize that we had it pretty good after all...this poem sounds like you've counted the cost and have a plan to sweep her off her feet...if only she'll give you the nod...you're not going to stop at "just once" are you?
if you get a second chance...you're never gonna stop, right?
Nice piece...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I think this is a good poem. I really liked it. I think everyone wants this to happen...I loved it. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i lvd ur poem............

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel the repeating just once drives in that desire to experience it, wow this is very heartfelt and thus a good write but sad if your actually going through this. I wish I could take you a year from now so that you could see there is life without her. However your writing and that is healing the soul. Keep writing my friend and exploring this void.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

how lovely you take an every day item and build around it a gorgeous love song~


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 20, 2010
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