It Hurts

how painful can love be ...

Just when i had begun mending up my broken heart
Just as i was learning to cope up and live with your memories
that had by now become an integral part.

You came back again
To stay in your proximity is something i just couldn't refrain.

May be it's my fault cause I perceived your actions to be out of love
Whereas all along they were baseless yet sweet , akin to a delicious pud.

You cite quite a few reasons and turn wry
But the haunting truth is ma'm u never gave my love even a try.

And now as i lay herein
All i can do is cry ... cause i know that no matter what
my tears will never run dry . . .

Reviews

[♥(heatherawesome..]

this is awesome and i love it and you did an awesome job on it

[KatiePie]

This was.. dripping with so much emotion and you express yourself so well. The pain is vivid. Beautiful.
-Cathrine

[Elizabeth]

Well done! I agree with the other reviewer who said the last stanza says it all.

[Albatross]

Amen.. Love hurts when it turns back on you. Very good poem, I really liked it.. Thanks for sharing.

[emmajoy]

Sad, so sad, beautifully expressed. Could cry for you .. but also, will wish you a slow return to knowing what love can be .. in time, dear writer.

[Prateeksha Khot]

And now as i lay herein
All i can do is cry ... cause i know that no matter what
my tears will never run dry .

The last stanza says it all..........

[Randy`s Princess]

love it I mean emotive and real love can hurt sometime`s way to much lol so can lust believe me this is great though :)

[ShaneBerry]

"cause i know that no matter what
my tears will never run dry"- best line!
i loved this write, great emotion and word choice!