It Hurts

how painful can love be ...

Just when i had begun mending up my broken heart
Just as i was learning to cope up and live with your memories
that had by now become an integral part.

You came back again
To stay in your proximity is something i just couldn't refrain.

May be it's my fault cause I perceived your actions to be out of love
Whereas all along they were baseless yet sweet , akin to a delicious pud.

You cite quite a few reasons and turn wry
But the haunting truth is ma'm u never gave my love even a try.

And now as i lay herein
All i can do is cry ... cause i know that no matter what
my tears will never run dry . . .

Reviews

[*** Hey Jude***]

The words you write carry a piece of you that is familiar to me.
"You came back again
To stay in your proximity is something i just couldn't refrain."

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a deep well of human emotion~sincere and so personal~ beautiful write~

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

This is simple and honesty...*smiles.I want to tell you something always do retain this voice in your words keep it simple,real cause that is what makes your poems different.

[Alice_In_WhateverLand]

this is a good poem, all the elements are there :)

[Abdul Aziz]

Very good write.

"To stay in your proximity is something i just couldn't refrain"
Don't we all go through that phase of life? :-/
The setiment expressed is good, but I suggest you tweak the grammatical structure just a bit to make it more effective.

Sorrow and regret form the main theme of this poem and run throughout it.
Very good piece, but I think it can yet be improved!

[Dupree]

This is a great piece. Your pain comes through loud and clear

[JENY]

Stop…crying….
You have done enough…..

[SamBug]

This was so simple and good. Great job.

[R.S. Wilder]

The simplicity of your words gave this the beauty of being straight forward - a 'this is me' effect. Love hurts like hell - but when it's good, it's EXCELLENT. Nevertheless, a wonderful write that was expressed perfectly.

[deeps]

This is amazing. Such an enjoyable read. I like this alot