Forgive me ...

calling out to she who's my life

Forgive me
for your hate isn't something I can take
My feelings for you were never fake.

Forgive me
for I pine for you
Without you my beats will be painful, whatsoever few.

Forgive me
for I long to be fed by your tender hands
The nimble fingers that weave magic akin to a wand.

Forgive me
for without you I am all alone
Herein lies a void, only if it could be shown.

Forgive me
for 'I love you' ain't just a line
It’s a compendium of my emotions, left unbound by time.

Forgive me
for without you my nights are blue
Staring at the crescent moon, all i can ever think of is you.

Forgive me
for redemption is all i seek
I will henceforth be cautious, even turn meek.

Forgive me
for I want to hold you once again
Just to reinstate the belief that I am still sane.

   Forgive me
for I want to see the sweet smile on your face

The gleam that drives away melancholy without a trace.

Forgive me
for all my dreams are cast around you
Once shattered, they won't be build anew.

Forgive me
for I have lost possession of my heart
It's yours now, even death won't do it part.

Forgive me
for i crave to wipe away your tears
Transcend with you to a utopian world where there ain't no fear.

Forgive me
for at times i went overboard
And behaved as a lout belonging to the horde.

Forgive me
for "You know me inside out" is all i can say
To regain your trust my lady, any price i am ready to pay.

Forgive me
for with you inside, i was never alone
I brazenly faced the world to which i now fall prone.

Forgive me
for my soul is already taken
Watching you walk away, my inner core is shaken.

Forgive me
for nyctalgia is slowly beginning to grow
Rendering me weak at the knees, forcing me to kowtow.

Forgive me
for its hard to deal with the pain of losing you everywhere i go
I can no longer put on a show.

Forgive me
for all i beg for is one last try
The last chance before you turn away and say goodbye.

Forgive me
for however naive this may sound
You are the only ethereal beauty this mortal has ever found.

Forgive me

for till my last breath i'll keep praying to the Heavens above

awaiting to hear from my angel , the three magical words of Love.

Forgive me
for i can't stop loving you
It's something that i will always do.

Forgive me...

Author's Note

honest reviews are most welcome .. i have poured my heart out to shell out these words ..

Reviews

[Liza]

the literal wording flowed smoothly
the emotions felt like they were genuinely expressed
sometimes i wondered if you were asking forgiveness from a lover and other times i was wondering if the forgiveness you really seek is from self for giving so much to another that does not give back...
you inspired a lot of emotion and that in itself makes a great write.

[MiidniightSoul]

Your poem is very good...The emotions are so intense I really felt sadness coming from this poem. Besides that, it was very well written. ^___^

[KatiePie]

Wow. I could feel every emotion bursting through the words of this. I love poems that use repetition. Your pain bursts through. The flow is unique and I like it very much, good write :)

[Elizabeth]

The rhyme scheme is well done. Did you mean "built anew"? Instead of build... just wondering. This is so well done. It hurt to read because it was so raw. Good work!

[Angel Veselinov]

Really nice!!! I guess you can get to be easily forgiven after you say this in front of someone. Very strong and touching poem. Thanks for sharing those emotions with us.

[Tate Morgan]

I think in this It would be better to list the good then the bad and the request for forgivness be the very last act printed

[Tai Chi Italy Take Two]

I cannot believe that she can hate you. This is just the way you feel. I believe she will forgive you, because she knows your love is real.

Sorry is the smallest of words, and yet it takes the biggest of men to use it.

Great write.

Smiling at you

Tai

[R.S. Wilder]

....Beautiful...

[Laura Yida <3]

this is really cute. kind of brought tears to my eyes lol but its amazing. i love it.

[JENY]

Yes I can see it in your words…
Depth of our grief,
But…my friend,
what is the need of this feeling of guilt…..
Sense of loss….ok….
I enjoyed poem….
I will go through rest of your creations….

[Dani]

Your heart is felt through these words that pain me to see in another human. I too suffer from nyctalgia. Watching the crescent moon, part way between a half moon and a new moon, or between a new moon and a half moon; seeming to leave me praying for fullness of love that only your Czarina gives. Nice! D