Forgive me ...

Forgive me ...

A Poem by the_stoic
"

calling out to she who's my life

"

Forgive me
for your hate isn't something I can take
My feelings for you were never fake.

Forgive me
for I pine for you
Without you my beats will be painful, whatsoever few.

Forgive me
for I long to be fed by your tender hands
The nimble fingers that weave magic akin to a wand.

Forgive me
for without you I am all alone
Herein lies a void, only if it could be shown.

Forgive me
for 'I love you' ain't just a line
It’s a compendium of my emotions, left unbound by time.

Forgive me
for without you my nights are blue
Staring at the crescent moon, all i can ever think of is you.

Forgive me
for redemption is all i seek
I will henceforth be cautious, even turn meek.

Forgive me
for I want to hold you once again
Just to reinstate the belief that I am still sane.

   Forgive me
for I want to see the sweet smile on your face

The gleam that drives away melancholy without a trace.


Forgive me
for all my dreams are cast around you
Once shattered, they won't be build anew.

Forgive me
for I have lost possession of my heart
It's yours now, even death won't do it part.

Forgive me
for i crave to wipe away your tears
Transcend with you to a utopian world where there ain't no fear.

Forgive me
for at times i went overboard
And behaved as a lout belonging to the horde.

Forgive me
for "You know me inside out" is all i can say
To regain your trust my lady, any price i am ready to pay.

Forgive me
for with you inside, i was never alone
I brazenly faced the world to which i now fall prone.

Forgive me
for my soul is already taken
Watching you walk away, my inner core is shaken.

Forgive me
for nyctalgia is slowly beginning to grow
Rendering me weak at the knees, forcing me to kowtow.

Forgive me
for its hard to deal with the pain of losing you everywhere i go
I can no longer put on a show.

Forgive me
for all i beg for is one last try
The last chance before you turn away and say goodbye.

Forgive me
for however naive this may sound
You are the only ethereal beauty this mortal has ever found.

Forgive me

for till my last breath i'll keep praying to the Heavens above

awaiting to hear from my angel , the three magical words of Love.

Forgive me
for i can't stop loving you
It's something that i will always do.

Forgive me...

© 2010 the_stoic


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the_stoic
honest reviews are most welcome .. i have poured my heart out to shell out these words ..

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the literal wording flowed smoothly
the emotions felt like they were genuinely expressed
sometimes i wondered if you were asking forgiveness from a lover and other times i was wondering if the forgiveness you really seek is from self for giving so much to another that does not give back...
you inspired a lot of emotion and that in itself makes a great write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.




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I was wondering if it worked for you...did your plaints bridge the gulf between you... There are two choices we have...either we choose to forgive or we choose to take offence...It would be hard to question your veracity with such a heartfelt appeal...so...she either forgave you or she's not ready to let you out of the doghouse yet...you stated you case eloquently...I hope she forgives you...you're in limbo land until she does...
There's nothing better than makeup sex...lol


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You should never have to asked forgiveness for loving someone. I hope that special someone makes you happy once again, waving her magical wand with the only tender hands you desire to touch you. Word ~ Judi :-)

Posted 14 Years Ago


In its deep meaning; this could be a prayer.
Great work; keep writing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow- this was a great poem. the words are beautiful. they touch deeply.
I love this poem and I am putting it in my library.
I know this kind of pain and it is consuming. I hope you can recover either way.

But remember- words are the easy part- if she comes back, you must stand behind those words...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It makes me sad you feel the need for forgiveness from someone that hurt you so bad. Its your call, just make sure thats what you want! Insightful write ~ Jude :-)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your words have both a vast, universal feel, and a deeply emotive, personal feel as well. The repetition of the primary thought brings such a rhythmic flow to your piece. Powerful, moving work that sings of grace, mercy, and love...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Firstly *smiles and a special mention for the review of iota and Liza.They were very true and lovely.
Yes this poem is so very lovely,powerful and striking cause of the emotions here which are so very raw and so very honest..and yes I do agree what love does to us...indeed how it breaks our heart and beyond...basically how it breaks us.We are so keen to win our love back,that we can do and be anything for our loved one but in the process what we lose is our self respect.Just want to say something that I myself do not follow at times,Nothing is more important than one person that is 'you'..

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can't help but wonder, what did you do that was so awful to lose her? retorical quesiton yes but it is what I thought. There is one here on WC that I hope will read this to see that men when left by a love do miss more of them than the physical. It is so difficult loving someone like this and not having it returned it seems to only intensify the love and almost need for them. I hope that if she doesn't return you will be able to recover and discover that even after a heart break like this, the heart will recover and will love again, it is our strongest organ and it is durable.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

mein pyar mein belive nahi karta tha abhi tak
but ashiqi kya bna dete hai bande ko ab jana
seriously ab mughe pyar karne se dar lagta hai
she would have been really wonderful
keep doing its wonderful to read ur poems

Posted 14 Years Ago


the literal wording flowed smoothly
the emotions felt like they were genuinely expressed
sometimes i wondered if you were asking forgiveness from a lover and other times i was wondering if the forgiveness you really seek is from self for giving so much to another that does not give back...
you inspired a lot of emotion and that in itself makes a great write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.


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