Forgive me ...

calling out to she who's my life

Forgive me
for your hate isn't something I can take
My feelings for you were never fake.

Forgive me
for I pine for you
Without you my beats will be painful, whatsoever few.

Forgive me
for I long to be fed by your tender hands
The nimble fingers that weave magic akin to a wand.

Forgive me
for without you I am all alone
Herein lies a void, only if it could be shown.

Forgive me
for 'I love you' ain't just a line
It’s a compendium of my emotions, left unbound by time.

Forgive me
for without you my nights are blue
Staring at the crescent moon, all i can ever think of is you.

Forgive me
for redemption is all i seek
I will henceforth be cautious, even turn meek.

Forgive me
for I want to hold you once again
Just to reinstate the belief that I am still sane.

   Forgive me
for I want to see the sweet smile on your face

The gleam that drives away melancholy without a trace.

Forgive me
for all my dreams are cast around you
Once shattered, they won't be build anew.

Forgive me
for I have lost possession of my heart
It's yours now, even death won't do it part.

Forgive me
for i crave to wipe away your tears
Transcend with you to a utopian world where there ain't no fear.

Forgive me
for at times i went overboard
And behaved as a lout belonging to the horde.

Forgive me
for "You know me inside out" is all i can say
To regain your trust my lady, any price i am ready to pay.

Forgive me
for with you inside, i was never alone
I brazenly faced the world to which i now fall prone.

Forgive me
for my soul is already taken
Watching you walk away, my inner core is shaken.

Forgive me
for nyctalgia is slowly beginning to grow
Rendering me weak at the knees, forcing me to kowtow.

Forgive me
for its hard to deal with the pain of losing you everywhere i go
I can no longer put on a show.

Forgive me
for all i beg for is one last try
The last chance before you turn away and say goodbye.

Forgive me
for however naive this may sound
You are the only ethereal beauty this mortal has ever found.

Forgive me

for till my last breath i'll keep praying to the Heavens above

awaiting to hear from my angel , the three magical words of Love.

Forgive me
for i can't stop loving you
It's something that i will always do.

Forgive me...

Author's Note

honest reviews are most welcome .. i have poured my heart out to shell out these words ..

Reviews

[Liza]

the literal wording flowed smoothly
the emotions felt like they were genuinely expressed
sometimes i wondered if you were asking forgiveness from a lover and other times i was wondering if the forgiveness you really seek is from self for giving so much to another that does not give back...
you inspired a lot of emotion and that in itself makes a great write.

[Ruth]

This is a beautiful piece of writing!
A wonderfully emotive piece that reflects, immerses and shows the honest heart, simply put, wonderful lol
I like it a lot!
xx

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

i like authenticity of the poem, the way it struck on my heart....if i were that person i will really forgive you:) good work

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

how heartrending to hear one ask forgiveness for such profound love~truly you did pour from the deep wells of emotion into this beautiful and sad poem~

[Cherrie]

tender, kind and touching,

[emmajoy]

So sad to ask forgiveness when you've given and shared love .. there's a saying, hard to take, hard to understand, 'better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all'. Should we ever regret having loved someone, should we ever feel that it was a waste of time, a foolish use of emotion? No!!!

'Forgive me
for with you inside , i was never alone
I brazenly faced the world to which i now fall prone.'

You've set down your feelings in such a moving and emotional way, beautiful.

[Bubo]

Reading this is heart breaking, so so sad..........and reminds me love truly can suck!
It is a beautiful sorrow you have written and what hurts more is you are sorry.......sorry for loving someone, and really I don't think you should be sorry at all........you have expressed a heart broken, and its a great write.

[Cynthia]

That's such a great poem!
This is beautiful!
That's a sweet poem!!
I love this one!!

[Martina]

I'm at a loss for words, this poem was so beautiful. It flows, and the repeated line really works - something that often times doesn't. The last stanza really sums up the whole poem, awesome job.

[Sheila Kline]

It is apparent you have indeed poured out your heart to ask for forgiveness of this person. I do hope you were forgiven!
Your write is most touching, and profoundly humble!

[Abdul Aziz]

This really shows your desperation and your love for her, bro! I truly agree with what you said about how deeply we guys feel when we lose a loved one. Your poem is truly a part of you, shared with us.
When I started reading this poem, I thought it had shades of forced rhyme in it. But then, as it progressed, I realized that it did help the cause of the poem! It imparts a feeling of hurt to the write, I don't know why. There is great poignancy in every three line stanza. I know that writing this poem wouldn't have helped you achieve catharsis, not even close to that. But I hope this does make you feel better, that all is not lost. I hope she forgives you for what you did too, if you did anything at all!
Great write.
100/100
P.S. Just a couple of mistakes: "Once shattered , they won't be build anew.".. It should be "built"
"It's yours now , even death won't do it apart.".. it might have been "even death won't do it part" or "even death won't do you part".