Forgive me ...

calling out to she who's my life

Forgive me
for your hate isn't something I can take
My feelings for you were never fake.

Forgive me
for I pine for you
Without you my beats will be painful, whatsoever few.

Forgive me
for I long to be fed by your tender hands
The nimble fingers that weave magic akin to a wand.

Forgive me
for without you I am all alone
Herein lies a void, only if it could be shown.

Forgive me
for 'I love you' ain't just a line
It’s a compendium of my emotions, left unbound by time.

Forgive me
for without you my nights are blue
Staring at the crescent moon, all i can ever think of is you.

Forgive me
for redemption is all i seek
I will henceforth be cautious, even turn meek.

Forgive me
for I want to hold you once again
Just to reinstate the belief that I am still sane.

   Forgive me
for I want to see the sweet smile on your face

The gleam that drives away melancholy without a trace.

Forgive me
for all my dreams are cast around you
Once shattered, they won't be build anew.

Forgive me
for I have lost possession of my heart
It's yours now, even death won't do it part.

Forgive me
for i crave to wipe away your tears
Transcend with you to a utopian world where there ain't no fear.

Forgive me
for at times i went overboard
And behaved as a lout belonging to the horde.

Forgive me
for "You know me inside out" is all i can say
To regain your trust my lady, any price i am ready to pay.

Forgive me
for with you inside, i was never alone
I brazenly faced the world to which i now fall prone.

Forgive me
for my soul is already taken
Watching you walk away, my inner core is shaken.

Forgive me
for nyctalgia is slowly beginning to grow
Rendering me weak at the knees, forcing me to kowtow.

Forgive me
for its hard to deal with the pain of losing you everywhere i go
I can no longer put on a show.

Forgive me
for all i beg for is one last try
The last chance before you turn away and say goodbye.

Forgive me
for however naive this may sound
You are the only ethereal beauty this mortal has ever found.

Forgive me

for till my last breath i'll keep praying to the Heavens above

awaiting to hear from my angel , the three magical words of Love.

Forgive me
for i can't stop loving you
It's something that i will always do.

Forgive me...

Author's Note

honest reviews are most welcome .. i have poured my heart out to shell out these words ..

Reviews

[Liza]

the literal wording flowed smoothly
the emotions felt like they were genuinely expressed
sometimes i wondered if you were asking forgiveness from a lover and other times i was wondering if the forgiveness you really seek is from self for giving so much to another that does not give back...
you inspired a lot of emotion and that in itself makes a great write.

[Nida Lodi]

You are the only ethereal beauty this mortal has ever found....
i love this line for true love streams down placidly with so much of sanctity poured in a lover's heart....your words reflect how pure and pristine is your soul........

[fallnone]

this is an exseptional poem, speaks of true an ever lasting love that can't be returned. I know how you feel, you never know how much you love them until they take their love away.

[Brittany W]

Simply beautiful, i could feel the emotions coming from your words, fantastic job.

[soulsearching]

Beautiful..

its incredibly emote...i lovd it..every1 who is or who once was in love can empathy..now i m also feelng lyk writing a poem related to it..

[Murtuza]

I love the honesty in your words. A nice read :)

[KAREN]

Excellent write! I could feel the begging for forgiveness! Alot of emotions spilling out!

[Arabdha]

this is by far one of the most romantic poems i have come across..excellent..brilliant..fantastic..you have a truly amazing vocabulary.."Forgive me for 'I love you' ain't just a line
It’s a compendium of my emotions, left unbound by time"..wow..another addition to my favorites !

[sweta'karman']

you cannot be forgiven for you contain soooooooooooooo strong emotions inside...great expression and it takes the reader to a rythmic flight....thank you for writing this master piece....grat work................

[stellasautelle]

Great poem.. i loved it