An Ode to Love

LOVE is the most beautiful relationships of all .. wish people could understand its importance

Life is but a hollow shaft
To render it fruitful one must know the craft
They say love ain't anything but a blank draft
But the truth is it gets colourful if you are blessed with the blissful art .

Who has the time , thou may say
But sit back and realize you may
Your heart is still empty cause you are caught up in the daily grind
To redeem your self, Love it is my dear friend that you need to find .

As for me , memories are all i have
That's my fuel cause till the end i need to drive
May be that's where i'll find Her again .. She who's my life
My heart will surely again strive
to gain the love, of which i have always been deprived . . .

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Love does make life so worth living, giving it hues of the richest, deepest colors. Your words here give us that sense of longing to find the one who will fill us and that we can love without end. Beautiful and reflective.

[KatiePie]

This whole thing is bleeding with your talent, it's amazing how perfect you can capture emotions in your words and make the reader feel what your feeling. Great write!
-Cathrine

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

this was a nice write. I really liked the poem. It was sad though. Thanks for sharing. :()

[Cherrie]

sad ending laced in hope, very nice

[JENY]

Love you so much….

[Abdul Aziz]

Neat write, well packaged. I like the message you give in this write. And the conclusion is very hopeful.
"My heart will surely again strive
to gain the love of which i have always been deprived"
The only gripe I have is that the rhymes sometimes don't feel natural, but I have an inkling that it might have been intentional.
A good poem, nonetheless!

[ShaneBerry]

very deep, but there is only one thing wrong with it, the word "aint" is not compatable wit it lol, i love the rest tough!

[Randy`s Princess]

Very good I like the way you describe emotions I find that hard sometimes in my writing you have a knack maybe I need tips :) well done

[OkieWonKenokie]

This is so true! Beautiful write and I really love the rhyming in this. Would love to read some more from you.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

you deliver the ache so palpably~ self exploration like the strum of a heartstring~ love discovery outward reaching~the last two lines of hope balance out the sorrow beautifully~