the silence of your
words
awaits to be comprehended.
the sweetness of your voice
awaits to be resounded.
the impressions of your smile
await to be minted.
the sense of your touch
awaits to be felt.
the depth in your eyes
awaits to be explored.
the beauty of your visage
awaits to be cherished.
the presence of your being
awaits to be treasured.
the void in your soul
awaits to be satiated.
The wait shall end with the one
the hope of being who, has dwindled in me
yet, I’ll trudge along on the sidelines
till the blessed soul comes in to hold your hand
forever, as it's destined to be...
~
Destined, a word - we hope to find in our lifetime. await on the sidelines - await for the one. yes we never know what is in store for us. We just have to wait and see. For one day we are destined to find hopefully that one. A poem of hope, yet longing to be there waiting to find that one - the one you are destined. A lovely piece. Thank you for sharing.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
it's not about me finding 'the one'. It's about my lady finding the one for her, which i know i can .. read moreit's not about me finding 'the one'. It's about my lady finding the one for her, which i know i can never be ..
thanks for the read.
12 Years Ago
You are welcome. And not necessarily about you , I can see, but yes anyone finding the one. Great pi.. read moreYou are welcome. And not necessarily about you , I can see, but yes anyone finding the one. Great piece.
Maybe this is your thoughts for someone else but your understanding of these hopes and ability to articulate them so eloquently is powerful in itself. This is an absolutely beautiful write. Enter this is contest and I think it will speak for itself. 100/100
Destined, a word - we hope to find in our lifetime. await on the sidelines - await for the one. yes we never know what is in store for us. We just have to wait and see. For one day we are destined to find hopefully that one. A poem of hope, yet longing to be there waiting to find that one - the one you are destined. A lovely piece. Thank you for sharing.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
it's not about me finding 'the one'. It's about my lady finding the one for her, which i know i can .. read moreit's not about me finding 'the one'. It's about my lady finding the one for her, which i know i can never be ..
thanks for the read.
12 Years Ago
You are welcome. And not necessarily about you , I can see, but yes anyone finding the one. Great pi.. read moreYou are welcome. And not necessarily about you , I can see, but yes anyone finding the one. Great piece.
A amazing poem. We never know what may await us. Unless we take a chance. I like the flow of thoughts and the strong ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
thanks you for your words sir ! always appreciated :)
i won't go about describing myself cause it'll end up as a self deprecatory saga .. my poems are there to speak for me .
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