Heart, mind & soul ..

The strings of my heart
strum with a fervour anew
emanating a harmonizing tune
reminding me of my love
in You

The impressions of my mind
connect the dots with no ado
sketching an adorable visage
reminding me of my love

in You

The innervation of my soul
brings an essence of my beau
ruffling a dormant spirit to life
reminding me of my love
in You

~

Reviews

[Wikiwit]

Loved the scheme, and the meaning hit home..:)
Nice one...

[the_stoic]

thanks for the read!

[Sky]

Lovely! A harmonious piece written. I love this!

[the_stoic]

thanks :)

[Leigh]

Beautiful

[the_stoic]

thanks !

[Allycat]

beautiful piece. Its a very sweet piece, well done! :)

[the_stoic]

thanks :)

[Poetic Beauty]

This is beautiful and I love the repetition in this piece.

[the_stoic]

thanks for the read mam !

[Poetic Beauty]

you are more than welcome

[Larry Dyson]

formal by yoda standards me thinks.

[The Random Writings Of ..]

This is like a lyric of a beautiful song. So simple, and beautiful. I love the last lines in each stanza - reminding me of my love in you. So tender and heartfelt. This is harmonizing piece, that plays in your soul. Lovely write!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Tender and soft emotion leading the reader to a good place. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Tate Morgan]

This is your best work by a factor of ten

[elizabutterfly]

its so melodious..it totally captivated me.so beautiful