the chosen one

the chosen one

A Poem by the_stoic

a curse was cast on me 
the day i was born
do good howsoever i might
the thorns shall always adorn.

endured i have, through all these years
mentally, physically and spiritually
believing in the man up there
having forgotten that he won't budge
what with him being the whip master.
and now as i reach the threshold to it all
i have a choice to make
either i beg him yet again for mercy
or push myself into the purgatory.
having indulged in the first for quite long
I choose to take the path to perdition
let's see how much more before this frail vessel drowns
bring it on o Lord! for i am the chosen one...


© 2012 the_stoic


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Would be difficult for the chosen one. Hard to see flame of good or evil today. A lot of both are burning in many places. I enjoyed the thoughts and description in this poem. Open the door to a large and long discussion. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Sometimes have to declare the self as such to overcome the battles that fate bestows! Poignant love xoxo

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Would be difficult for the chosen one. Hard to see flame of good or evil today. A lot of both are burning in many places. I enjoyed the thoughts and description in this poem. Open the door to a large and long discussion. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What an agony... fated to pain... a destiny that cannot be undone.. unless. The hand of Providence raises and crushes... and how sweet is the taste of mercy when it comes.. undeserved and refreshing... Your words pour a cup so deeply, my friend.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This makes me think of the book of Job in the bible and him being.tested. strong write

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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