Unrequited

Unrequited       

She doesn’t give herself enough credit 

She is worthy of so much more in life

She hides her beauty and her talents.

What could be the fear? 

Perhaps someone could love her again

As should be…

Words of passion burst forth from within

Creating images to make one blush and swoon

Would that that passion be for one as old as I?

I could not tell.

She disguises her beautiful mane beneath a cap of cotton.

I see in her eyes a sparkle that fashion could be had.

Her lips revealed a smile that called to me

 I wanted to kiss those lips but dared not try.

Reviews

[Janice Ann]

Beautiful words. And I am sure that the person you have described would appreciate such words. Wonderful work indeed.
"She disguises her beautiful mane beneath a cap of cotton..." I love how sweet and normal this line is...

Wonderful job dear!

Janice Ann

[J.Black]

"She hides her beauty and her talents.
What could be the fear?"

I know how this girl feels... I can relate and I thank Angel for showing me this.

[Ron Reardon]

The mix of passion and pain comes out nicely!

[Satchmo's Gal]

I love it love it love it. I am so glad Angel suggested I read this

[Angel's Lady]

I see you are an artist indeed, creating such a vision, as you paint with words...

Good job! It's always inspiring to have a muse, isn't it?