A boy by the bay

A boy sat by the bay

Thinking about his day

But then his thoughts went away

And the boy was left for the day

Reviews

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

I liked this little whimsical poem of yours. It's a solid piece of writing. I hope you continue to write and submit your art. Don't be discouraged and just know that art is subjective. Just because someone may critique or be critical of something written doesn't mean it's bad. Others may find enjoyment and admiration for it and like reading it. So keep writing and growing your art and voice because it really is a lifetime journey.

[light and ashes]

interesting..............