Rain

Rain

A Poem by gsbito
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From my book "Lost Emotions". Poetry I wrote back in the 1970's. Relationships, love, darkness.

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Rain comes...

washing my thoughts

away.

Down.

Forms a puddle at my feet.

Deep.

Dark.

Emotion.

Can I share this feeling

with you?

You bring me…

rain.

 

Copyright 2009 - Greg Bito from "Lost Emotions"

© 2013 gsbito


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Rain is exqactly what we need here as we are in a major drought..So dry the trees have all ready shed their leaves..If you have any extra rain to spare could you send some our way???Valentine

Posted 12 Years Ago


Like hearing an old friend...

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 9, 2012
Last Updated on January 29, 2013
Tags: life, love, Lost Emotions, lonely, loneliness, Greg Bito, sad, dark, trust