The Part of Me She Left Behind Her

We all deserve closer.

 The other day I bumped into an old flame of mine,

the emotional chains wrapped around me.

I could not even look into her eyes,

memories tried to blind me.

 Though the conversation was friendly,

it lacked any substance at all,

I could feel freedom wings inside me.

 As we exchanged hollow "give me a call",

I  could finally see behind me.

 I watched as she walked away,

thanked whom ever for this day.

I found more of me  right there,

all the parts of me she had left behind her.

Reviews

[Kevin Shea]

very quick read that does all its supposed to. Every sentence drove the story on or explained it further. Very well done!

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

This is wonderful! Love it.