I'm Not Sorry

I will not apologize for being me.

you want me to feel sorry

as if 

my breath

interferes with yours

if i breathe in too deeply

you won't have enough air yourself

as if

my feet

affect your movement

if i walk too far ahead

you'll have nowhere to go

but i do not control you

Reviews

[R.E. Ray]

A strong, confident message, though laced with some bitterness. It works well here. The best line is perhaps the last, and certainly a stinging parting shot... "but I do not control you," which also conveys "you don't control me!" Nice work!

[Mariah Renae]

Powerful... and a message worth sharing.

[John the Baptist]

Spare and frank. After a certain point, let them walk. Nicely done.

[wordman]

hell, i aint sorry neither