The twinkle in her eyes

the twinkle

in her eyes

isn't 

bliss, or 

love, or 

lust

but reality

grieving 

over the

loss of

imaginary souls

Reviews

[Tony Jordan]

I think this is an awesome piece. Powerful in its brevity.

[grey.eyes]

much thanks for your feedback :)

[David R Gonzalez]

I love it when short poems perfectly capture an emotion or a thought. this has definitely done this. good job!

[grey.eyes]

thank you, i appreciate your feedback :)

[B]

Eyes can tell quite alot
Bravo well done

[grey.eyes]

:) they can indeed, thank you very much :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

poetry that says so much in so few words....THAT is what I LOVE....Did it for ME

[grey.eyes]

Thank you so much!! :)

[Gabrielle]

Love this! Left me considering what imaginary souls lost would mean to me. Great job, keep it up! :)

[grey.eyes]

Thank you very much! :)