Can You Imagine...

Can You Imagine...

A Poem by The Papermate Pen

Can you imagine...

A start without a finish,

Brilliant candlelight that won't diminish,

Candles burning but no light,

Demons tucking you in at night,

Even trees stop losing leaves,

Firing your local thieves,

Growing another arm or leg,

Hoboes never having to beg,

Ice cream eating you instead,

Justin Bieber finally dead, (woo hoo!)

Kitchens that have no pots or pans,

Lame sports team with lots of fans, (Yankees, bleh!)

Monsters being scared of us,

No driver on a moving bus,

Oranges that come in pink,

Poisonous water in your bathroom sink,

Quiet gunshots out the window,

Real estate agents trying to sell a minow,

Singing without a voice,

To be choosing from no choice,

United States without any states,

Very fat people with very light weights,

Washing machines doing the drying,

XD smiley is really crying,

Yesterday I ate a poptart,

Z wondrous end having no start.

 

© 2010 The Papermate Pen


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So cool! I smiled through the entire thing!
"Real estate agents trying to sell a minow," was an especially funny mental picture!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was a cool poem, and I enjoyed the sight of an inverted world. Nice rhyme and word choice, and like the previous reviewer, I didn't realize it was acrostic until the end, so that's neat, also. I can totally see giant ice cream cones swallowing people up. "(Yankees, bleh!)" haha, You must be a Redsox fan :)
I like this one alot, good job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Fantastic write for the imagination, was so intrigued by the individual concepts of each line that I didn't realize that it was going down the ABC's. Clever and Fun.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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I can see but one light; the one to reality. I live in my laptop. Or, at least my soul does. Its trapped inside this maze of BITs. Lost into the virtual world. Well-nigh leaving me 'thout a life. It i.. more..

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