The exam

The exam

A Story by Greven
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Shhhhhhhh!

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Clik, clik, click, clik, clik,
*Yawn*
“Shh”
“SHHHH”
Clik, clik, click, clik, clik,
“What the hell? My screen just blacked out”
Clik, clik, click, clik, clik,
“Have you tried hitting the screen power button?”
“Yeah it isn’t that, the whole computer is shut off.”
Clik, clik, click, clik, clik,
“Arg damn it, the power cord was loose, a complete waste of time.”
“Well at least it has only been 10 minu-“
“SHHHHH”
Clik, clik, click, clik, clik,
*chew chew*
“Can I have one?”
“SHHHHHHH!”
Clik, clik, click, clik, clik,
*cough cough*
“Shh”
“SHHHH”
Clik, clik, click, clik, clik,

© 2009 Greven


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Love the rythm in this one. Has a great beat, and I can really relate to it. Fantastic concept,
a really short and well-written piece, as usual. These little skits seem to be your forte. :D
I love the dialogue and the sounds, it flows fantastically, full of vibrance.

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Added on July 6, 2009

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Greven
Greven

Egtved, Denmark



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Well I am 19 at the moment, been writing since I was 16 or so. I dont know what else is there to say? I enjoy Manga, have been doing some fanfics, and I write some strange and sometimes twisted storie.. more..

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