let your heart call out

i will stand by you as a guardian

When trouble is all you know,

Let your heart call out,

I’ll be right beside you,

 

When you stand at the edge ready to jump,

Let your heart call my name,

I’ll catch you and fly you to the ground,

 

When sadness takes over,

and tears fall from your heart,

I’ll hold you tight in a feathered embrace,

 

When your dreams are full of shadows,

And your heart screams in fear,

I will lay beside you till the morning sun rises,

 

When you feel that you don’t belong in this world,

I’ll come before your heart calls,

Show you the love that I feel,

Give you a reason to live,

 

When the time comes for the light to leave your eyes,

and your heart can no longer call to me,

I'll take you into my arms and fly you to gates of heaven,

for to be without you is a fate worse then death.

Author's Note

please re read pleasssse:P

Reviews

[Esana Bridges]

Second to last stanza, first line "fell" --> "feel".
Your info bar "I well stand by you as a guardian" --> "I will stand by you as a guardian".

It's very sweet, and it makes me wish that I could find a love like this. I love your repetition of "When". You portrayed true love very well - always there for somebody, there when you need them, there before you need them, always there, even when someone is gone. I also like the idea that your "heart" can call out - love is something that doesn't have to be vocal.

[Priscilla Sayers]

I love this poem. The surrender, the passion, the understanding that it can be as simple as just that.... Love, whole hearted, without boundaries, limitless. Strong and beautiful.

[stars are far]

This is really so nice :D
great poem :D

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

interesting but beautifully penned write. Heartfelt and touching.

~Anna Rose

[Amila Jay]

Lovely poem:)

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Love it...was so touched by it...

[Kat Collins]

Very sweet and romantic. I do find the ending interesting...why would he not be able to come when she calls? Why has he given himself to save her soul? It seems to be an all-encompassing love. Not one of your best, but still enjoyable.

[No name]

I really like it.

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

A poem of awe hope and wonder ... :)

[taylorrose]

makes me feel like there is someone to help you through the hard times thanks so much

[Summer'sBreeze]

i love it