Motherless

Motherless

A Poem by StormSeeker
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wrote for contest that required use of a set of ten words

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My heart dwells in grief
A voice guides my through my infancy
Awaited I emerge in loss
Far from the dream he did posses
A nursery filled with childish sounds
While a father weeps for a motherless soul

© 2008 StormSeeker


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A poem straight from the heart! Great!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Short but powerful.
No words are wasted.
The emotion are accessible to all who read.
Great write.



Posted 15 Years Ago


This is really good!
Just a little problem...line 2 should be "A voice guides ME through my infancy" (not "my").

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great write with wonderful impact on the reader.
Much enjoyed.

Helena

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a poem with a shallow feel, filled with sorrow and grief.
i liked the compact form; a blunted affect--a very nice use of all the
words! tovli

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You write of a sorrow many have faced.
Thanks for sharing it here.

Dee

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very sad. Which contest did you enter?

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, what a message is sent with this poem. Its heartfelt and real. I applaud you.

Great Piece

Live, Love and Learn

Lady V

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 18, 2008

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StormSeeker
StormSeeker

Stonewood, WV



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